the overall idea and painting great, but the weird perspective of the front one break everything, nice try

+4

nice colors and faces

beuteous! i love the theme, and the composition of it all.

Nice theme !!
But the background could have used some more contrast to the foreground

Looks ok, I would give some color distance to a picture, more warm colors near, colder colors at he backrgound. Anyway good !

The details are very nice. I really like the subtle color scheme.

I definetly think that with the body of the one in the front... I mean: The propositions aren't OK. The head seems way toooo big for that small body... just weird... hm :/

Reilanchan means proportions, I think. And I have to agree, there's something not exactly right with the foreshortening on the front figure. It does look less like perspective, more like a face-on body too tiny for the head and arm.

I can compliment your reserve with color... but you left wide areas of flat brownish background which must have been your canvas ground; and overall the color does not indicate distance and air. It's not exactly monochromatic, though coming close; you've just left yourself a very, very narrow range of saturations to work with, but allowed hues from all the rainbow round, at very low saturation. The result is not a real limited color scheme, it's just very chalky color. (See how the sleeve in front visually recedes so much, it seems to be much farther than the face of the girl in background.)

Your details are more than all right; your problems are in making the whole from those details.

Looks nice, but the proportions are odd. The arms are waay too short for the size of their bodies. I do like your color palette though, and your rendering job is nice too.

Nice!I like colors
I only think it require more depth, especially the girl in foreground. Her bust require shading(shadow) to seem more projecting ahead.

Bye

Thanks everyone. I will take your advice. thanks again.

This is an interesting piece. I like the subtle colors, and the semi-flat look to everything. it's dificult to visually separate the foreground figure from the background, but it's still pretty darn good.

It's a great idea and each part of the picture looks good, but the picture as a whole looks a little crowded and lacks a real focus point. A little flat. Still, better than anything I could do, so I'm giving you +3