Two girls

Painting \ Figure | 02/03/04 @416 | masa | critiques (7) | views (1822)

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holy

02/03/04 @458

fantastic work! Congratulations.
What about description?

PeachySticks

02/03/04 @464

woot! Welcome back to GFX, the more Taiwanese artist the better

This has a nice style, superb colouring. The picture crops at ther girl at the front's forehead which perhaps isn't too good; and the little lens flare doesn't go with the rest. That's small faults in a otherwise lovely painting though.

marcia

02/03/04 @771

Ugh. Red X!

arenhaus

02/04/04 @864

Good. But still very monochromatic and "compartmentalized". Please refresh your color interaction understanding.

Loomis has a section on that in "Creative Illustration" - recommended.

The spear does not look like it touches anything, the hand does not hold it. There's nothing to indicate its position relative to the hand, not even a tiniest shadow, and the hand itself confusingly looks like it's hooked in the belt - but the spear does not cause any change in the body and clothing either. It just "floats". That's what you get for not thinking of color interaction, see? It's not just about disappointingly flat color.

gama

02/05/04 @409

very nice but need more colors!

masa

02/05/04 @428

Thanks everyone. I will take your advice.

Wanz

06/06/04 @233

Pretty...lovely colours and texture

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